The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Contained in the two maps is information pertaining to the changes
of
a public Change preposition
in
library
from 20 years ago to the present day. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that more amenities are added to the whole Linking Words
library
whilst Use synonyms
books
are still available for children and Use synonyms
adult
.
Moving onto the central part of the Fix the agreement mistake
adults
library
where some tables and chairs were removed to create a huge blank space there. Regarding Use synonyms
to
the North East, the previous children’s Remove the preposition
apply
books
Use synonyms
room
was replaced by a lecture Use synonyms
room
with the relocation of adult Use synonyms
fiction
Use synonyms
books
outside the Use synonyms
room
from the opposite side. Not only the replacement of the Use synonyms
fiction
Use synonyms
books
but Use synonyms
also
the addition of an information desk and three self-service machines which were deposited in front of these Linking Words
books
, respectively. Use synonyms
Similarly
, located in the South East of the Linking Words
library
, the enquiry desk Use synonyms
where
many customers used to use Correct word choice
which
it
to get Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
tickets or book returns Correct article usage
apply
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
also
converted into a cafe for bookers.
Turning to the South West, it can be observed that the reading Linking Words
room
Use synonyms
where
contained newspapers and magazines was modernized to become a computer Correct word choice
which
room
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the changes Linking Words
also
Linking Words
occured
outside the reading Correct your spelling
occurred
room
, particularly Use synonyms
is
the removal of adult Correct your spelling
in
fiction
Use synonyms
books
to the East Use synonyms
and
was replaced with all Correct word choice
which
references
Change the noun form
reference
books
in the Use synonyms
library
. With respect to the North West, the Use synonyms
room
on the top of the left corner which stored CDs, videos and computer games, was renovated with the aim of celebrating storytelling events. Use synonyms
Besides
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
room
Use synonyms
also
added children’s Linking Words
fiction
Use synonyms
books
with a couple of Use synonyms
sofa
, laying the groundwork for customer’s convenience.Change to a plural noun
sofas
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books, room, fiction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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