The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.

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The maps illustrate a range of transformations which will be carried out in an industrial site in Norbiton.

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place is going to experience tremendous changes during

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period of time.

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, a wide variety of facilities

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as shops, a medical centre, a playground and a school will be constructed in

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area.

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, factories will be completely demolished and some new houses will be built in their place. On the commercial side, various shops are going to open on the southwest side of the main square.

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, some new roads will be developed from the main square, which is located in the centre of the region, to the north and northwest of

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area. With regard to facilities, a playground will be established in the middle of the road which is situated in the eastern section of the main square and a new school will be opened

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of the same road.

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, factories will be destroyed to make way for residential sites.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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