The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.
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The maps illustrate a range of transformations which will be carried out in an industrial site in Norbiton.
This
place is going to experience tremendous changes during this
period of time.
Overall
, a wide variety of facilities such
as shops, a medical centre, a playground and a school will be constructed in this
area. Moreover
, factories will be completely demolished and some new houses will be built in their place.
On the commercial side, various shops are going to open on the southwest side of the main square. Furthermore
, some new roads will be developed from the main square, which is located in the centre of the region, to the north and northwest of this
area. With regard to facilities, a playground will be established in the middle of the road which is situated in the eastern section of the main square and a new school will be opened at the end
of the same road. Finally
, factories will be destroyed to make way for residential sites.Submitted by maryam.nutrition1988 on
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