The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010

The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010
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The two pictures illustrate how the village of Rochefort had changed from 1930 to 2010.
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, the town underwent a number of dramatic changes, the most important of which are the expansion and relocation of
houses
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around the town, and a replacement for the farmlands catering for citizens' demand for accommodation and facilities. In the north-west of the town, the number of
houses
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around the
road
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had increased significantly, with a branch off roads opened creating a large number of
houses
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along. Under that
road
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, the shop in 1930 was removed in 2010, but the post office was still remaining. On the western right of the lake, the farmland had been turned into a square
road
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with a lot of accommodation built along it.
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in the southern
road
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, there were many blocks erected on both sides and two farmlands had disappeared. In the east, the big house with gardens had been split into two parts, one was a
road
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connected to the main one with 4 blocks,
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the other part of the land was rebuilt into a new retirement home. In the
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, the primary school had been increased in size which above was a new branch of
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road
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with
houses
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around. At the top of the picture, the bridge stayed remained.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • landscape
  • sparse population
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • recreational facilities
  • agricultural lands
  • local economy
  • transportation infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • public amenities
  • green spaces
  • quality of life
  • historical buildings
  • landmarks
  • preservation
  • urban development
  • environmental impacts
  • natural landscapes
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