The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010

The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010
The two pictures illustrate how the village of Rochefort had changed from 1930 to 2010.
Overall
, the town underwent a number of dramatic changes, the most important of which are the expansion and relocation of
houses
around the town, and a replacement for the farmlands catering for citizens' demand for accommodation and facilities. In the north-west of the town, the number of
houses
around the
road
had increased significantly, with a branch off roads opened creating a large number of
houses
along. Under that
road
, the shop in 1930 was removed in 2010, but the post office was still remaining. On the western right of the lake, the farmland had been turned into a square
road
with a lot of accommodation built along it.
While
in the southern
road
, there were many blocks erected on both sides and two farmlands had disappeared. In the east, the big house with gardens had been split into two parts, one was a
road
connected to the main one with 4 blocks,
while
the other part of the land was rebuilt into a new retirement home. In the
center-north
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, the primary school had been increased in size which above was a new branch of
road
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with
houses
around. At the top of the picture, the bridge stayed remained.
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  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • landscape
  • sparse population
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • recreational facilities
  • agricultural lands
  • local economy
  • transportation infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • public amenities
  • green spaces
  • quality of life
  • historical buildings
  • landmarks
  • preservation
  • urban development
  • environmental impacts
  • natural landscapes
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