The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The chart below illustrates the manufacturing of instant noodles and
this
man-made process represents flour, oil and water as the main resources.
To sum up
, there are 8 steps which can be shortened into 3 majors, starting with transporting flour by truck to storage silos, then
cooking ready-made food and finally
, delivering the product to consumers.
Furthermore
, there are specialized machines including a mixer, rollers and drying oven.
To commence with, flour is mixed and kneaded in a mixing appliance, then
the ready dough is stretched on rollers. The shells are added to cups, and filled with vegetables and spices. So, noodles are going to be wrapped with labels and sealed for freshness. Eventually, cups are boxed and shipped to the stores.Submitted by aizered097 on
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