The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010

The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010
The given map delineates some major changes that occurred in the village of
Stockfort
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Stockport
throughout the year 1930 to 2010
Overall
,
Stockfort
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Stockport
underwent a big transformation with more houses taking over the farmland and the new retirement home in 2010 More specifically, in 1930, the village was surrounded by farmland from the north to the south.
Moreover
, there was some infrastructure with a primary school and a garden on the east side. On the opposite side, there were some shops and a post office for local people to buy products and delivery. Over the years, the village had broadened with more houses had been built for residents. There were
also
two more post offices allocated
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the primary school on the east side in 2010. Nearby, the garden
then
was a place for retired people and took place for houses.
last
but not least, the bridge still located on the top of the map which crossing the river stoke throughout the years
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • landscape
  • sparse population
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • recreational facilities
  • agricultural lands
  • local economy
  • transportation infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • public amenities
  • green spaces
  • quality of life
  • historical buildings
  • landmarks
  • preservation
  • urban development
  • environmental impacts
  • natural landscapes
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