Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is major concern for people who seek to protect Environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, what effects does is have on animal life and human society?

Many environmentalists

concerned

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about the contamination of lakes, rivers and

seas

and

obviously

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obviously,

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these drawbacks have a major impact on human life and the ecosystem. There are many causes and effects of

this

matter and I will discuss them

further

in the essay.

To begin

with, there are some possible causes that lead to polluted

water

sources

. The biggest reason why the

pollution

of

water

increases is

due to

the fact that factories which built near the rivers or

seas

. Unfortunately number of these factories release chemical or toxic substances into the

water

.

Secondly

,

pollution

of

water

stems from a low culture of

people

in using natural resources, yearly dumping of trash in

water

sources

by some

people

increases and

this

issue is

due to

contaminating the

water

. Regarding contamination of

water

sources

and its effects, we could mention the impact

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problem on humans and the ecosystem.

Water

pollution

leads to injuring

fishes

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fish

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that live in the

seas

because fishes consume poisonous

water

and the consequence of

this

causes coming into existence various diseases in

people

because many

people

eat seafood every day especially

people

who live near the

seas

. In conclusion,

water

pollution

occurs for various reasons, including industrial activity, and

people

’s attitudes. government should set up strict laws to prevent those organizations that pollute

water

sources

and teach to

people

how be more kind to natural resources.