The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The bar chart illustrates the top ten countries for the
production
and consumption
of electricity
in 2014, presented in billions of kilowatt-hours
.
Overall
, Germany showed a contrasting value, with electricity
consumption
being higher than production
compared to the other nine countries, where production
was higher than consumption
.
It is clearly seen from the figure that China ranked first in both producing and consuming, with electricity
being generated at about 5,398 billion
kilowatt-hours
while
being used at around 5,322 billion
, followed by the United States in second place
, with no significant difference from China. Surprisingly, Russia ranked third,
with 4,099 billion
in production
and 3,866 billion
in consumption
, showing a considerable difference from the United States. Furthermore
, Japan was recorded in fourth place
, followed by India, Canada, France, and Brazil.
The least amount of electricity
production
and consumption
was illustrated by South Korea, where electricity
was produced at around 485 billion
and used at about 450 billion
kilowatt-hours
.
In summary, from third place
to tenth place
, similar values were presented, with production
between 618.9 and 485.1 and consumption
between 499.9 and 449.5, but the first and second rankings reached higher than 3,500 billion
kilowatt-hours
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