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The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
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The bar chart illustrates the top ten countries for the
production
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 and
consumption
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 of
electricity
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 in 2014, presented in billions of
kilowatt-hours
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.
Overall
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, Germany showed a contrasting value, with
electricity
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consumption
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 being higher than
production
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 compared to the other nine countries, where
production
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 was higher than
consumption
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. It is clearly seen from the figure that China ranked first in both producing and consuming, with
electricity
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 being generated at about 5,398
billion
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kilowatt-hours
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while
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 being used at around 5,322
billion
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, followed by the United States in second
place
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, with no significant difference from China. Surprisingly, Russia ranked
third,
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with 4,099
billion
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 in
production
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 and 3,866
billion
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 in
consumption
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, showing a considerable difference from the United States.
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, Japan was recorded in fourth
place
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, followed by India, Canada, France, and Brazil. The least amount of
electricity
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production
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 and
consumption
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 was illustrated by South Korea, where
electricity
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 was produced at around 485
billion
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 and used at about 450
billion
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kilowatt-hours
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. In summary, from third
place
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 to tenth
place
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, similar values were presented, with
production
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 between 618.9 and 485.1 and
consumption
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 between 499.9 and 449.5, but the first and second rankings reached higher than 3,500
billion
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kilowatt-hours
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.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, consumption, electricity, kilowatt-hours, billion, place with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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