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The bar chart below gives information about four countries spending habits of shopping on consumer goods in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below gives information about four countries spending habits of shopping on consumer goods in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the amount of
money
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 spent on different products in four countries in 2012. Units are measured in thousands.
Overall
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, it is evident that Britain had the highest figures for all goods,
whereas
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 Belgium and Austria ranked mainly
last
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 among the four countries. Regarding the diagram, it is obvious that the amount of
money
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 spent on all products was almost the same in Spain changing between 150.000 and 155.000 pounds string (
p
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). When it comes to Britain, it had the highest indicators, standing first in cameras and toys with approximately 168.000 and 170.000p, respectively. Shifting the focus to the rest, the indicators in console games and cosmetics were nearly equal for both Belgium and Austria, with roughly 145.000p. For cameras, toys, and books, Austria allocated much
money
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 with more than 155.000p,
while
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 the figure for Belgium spent the most significant amount of
money
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 on outdoor game accessories, with 150.000 pounds string.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, p with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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