The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates statistics which
was
reported by Correct subject-verb agreement
were
United
Correct article usage
the United
Nations
about social rates as well as
economical
in four Replace the word
economics
countries
in 1994.
Overall
, it can be seen that people who live in developed countries
, Canada and Japan, not only had a better life-style
situation in comparison to third-world Correct your spelling
lifestyle
nations
but also
they
were situated in better Correct pronoun usage
apply
postion
financially. Correct your spelling
positions
Also
, Zaire
was the poorest country amoung
all four other Correct your spelling
among
countries
.
On the one hand, among all those four nations
Japan had the highest amount of annual wages per person, 15760 USD, which was about hundred
times higher than in Correct article usage
a hundred
Zaire
where people had the lowest amount of salary in USD,130 USD. Also
, in countries
with higher earning
the number of calories which was used was higher than Correct your spelling
earnings
developing
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in developing
nations
. Canada had the most consumable individuals with 3326 calories each days
Change to a singular noun
day
while
Zaire
with consuming 47 colories
per day had the lowest amount of usage.
Correct your spelling
calories
On the other hand
, the life expectancy in Japan in 1994 stood at the highest and Canada was in second place with 78% and 76% repectively
. Correct your spelling
respectively
However
, people
of Correct article usage
the people
Zaire
had the lowest hope about life with only 47%. Countries
with the highest expectancy indicators had the most
literacy Correct word choice
highest
rate
with 99% for each country , Fix the agreement mistake
rates
Incontrast
Correct your spelling
In contrast
Zaire
citizens with 34
% rate of literacy had the lowest rate in 1994.Correct article usage
a 34
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