write a referral letter to the consultant cardiologist
Dear Dr Banerjee
I am writing to refer Ms Bennet 45-year-old lawyer, with the possibility of captopril side effects.
Ms Bennet was admitted to the emergent room of Oakville General Hospital on 8 Feb 2021 immediately after a sudden heart attack at the airport that led to the
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a Balloon-Expandable stent at the hospital.
after one week admission was discharged with captopril 50 mg 2 times per day and atorvastatin 80 mg per day.After one week on 15 May 2021, she came back with dizziness, lightheadedness, headache and episode
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, she worried about the medicine's side effects and requested discontinuation of the medication.I would appreciate your assessment of her to find out whether she needs to stop or change the medicine.
yours sincerely,
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task response
Include specific dates relevant to the medical events described, ensuring consistency in your timeline references.
Coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking the information into more distinct paragraphs to enhance readability, such as separating the patient’s medical background, current situation, and your specific request for the consultant.
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Review and double-check for typographical and grammatical errors for a polished letter.
task response
The letter provides a clear summary of the patient’s medical history and the current concern, which is crucial for the cardiologist to understand the case.
suitable writing tone
Your closing is properly formal and respectful, fitting the professional nature of the correspondence.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite