The bar chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
number
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of museum tourists
in
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three different types comprising adults,
visitors
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under 15 years old and special in the years 1997, 2002, 2007 and 2012.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
number
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of
visitors
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is varied,
however
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, it jumps up in the
last
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two periods and most of the participants are adults
while
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special exhibition attendees are the least.
To begin
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with, the
number
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of people who attended the museum in 1997 was 448,100 before a slight decrease to 441,200 in 2002. There was a surge in the
number
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of
visitors
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in 2007 to 525,000 and
then
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drop again in 2012, at 504,300.
Moreover
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, the adults, which was the first place, started the period at 300,100 and fluctuated to 400,500 in 2007 before declining to 380,000 in 2012. The
number
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of
visitors
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aged under 15 was obvious, began at 120,000 and gradually fell to 82,300 in 2012.
On the contrary
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, the trend of the special exhibition
visitors
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was reversed from people under 15. Starting at 28,000 but continuously inclined to 42,000 in the
last
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year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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