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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.
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The bar graph represents data
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 Brazil's economy based on five different categories in the year 2009, 2019 and 2029 respectively.
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, the chart depicts investments from all
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five contributions
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 as Finance, Food Processing, Manufacturing, Tourism and Oil,Coal and gas.
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 the data, Finance stands at the top of the figure with 30 to 40 per cent of
economy
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 growth
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 Food processing and Manufacturing appear to be the least. Tourism and Oil, Coal,
Gas
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and Gas
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industry
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industries
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 seem to be
consistant
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consistent
 with
no
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much
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 variations.
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, Manufacturing was the only industry that showed a significant drop in contribution to the Brazilian economy. That was from 20 to 5 per cent.
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 Finance was the only sector that got leveled up in the year 2029.
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, Tourism was the one category that made a constant share
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 the economic growth of Brazil in both 2019 and 2029.
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