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The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010

The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010
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The map indicates the change
of
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 the
village
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 of Stockefort between 1930 and 2010. In 1930, there were farmlands
at
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 the South and North East of the
village
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. There were only ten houses
along
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with
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the roads. Gardens and large
house
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houses
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 were at the East of the
village
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. And there was a primary school
at
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 the centre of the
village
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.
Moreover
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, in 2010, there were no more farmlands and more houses were built near the River Stoke, which had increased a double.
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, a retirement house was built
at
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 the East of the
village
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • landscape
  • sparse population
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • recreational facilities
  • agricultural lands
  • local economy
  • transportation infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • public amenities
  • green spaces
  • quality of life
  • historical buildings
  • landmarks
  • preservation
  • urban development
  • environmental impacts
  • natural landscapes
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