The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.
The graph shows the percentages of different industries, which influenced the
finance
of Brazil in the Fix the agreement mistake
finances
year
2009 and 2019, Fix the agreement mistake
years
as well as
the predictions in
2029. Change preposition
for
Overall
, it is evident that finance
sector had a superiority over others and the less Correct article usage
the finance
profiteable
sector Correct your spelling
profitable
has been
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was
a
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apply
food
production during given
period. Correct article usage
a given
Furthermore
, apart from finance
, each industry's share on
the Change preposition
of
overall
economy will decrease.
Looking into detail, as regards the past, in 2009, finance
accounted for 30% of whole
revenue of the country, which was three times as high as Add an article
the whole
the
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apply
food
processing. Tourism
sector was responsible for a quarter of the financial revenue, Add an article
The tourism
as well as
the traditional resources, such
as oil, coal, and gas, while
20% of profit
came from manufacturing. After ten decades, the proportions of Correct article usage
the profit
finance
, food
, and energy sources increased, whereas
manufacturing and tourism went down steadiliy
.
It is projected that Correct your spelling
steadily
finance
will responsible
for 40% of Add a missing verb
be responsible
overall
income. Tourism, manufacturing, and food
processing will witness a decrease to
20%, 5%, and 10%, respectively. There will beChange preposition
of
5
% decline in terms of industry of oil, coal and gas in 2029.Correct article usage
a 5
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as, overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words finance, food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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