The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four ASEAN countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph explains
about
the Change preposition
apply
percentage
of the Use synonyms
population
people living in four ASEAN cities from 1970 to 2020Use synonyms
,
and Remove the comma
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prediction
between 2030 and 2040. In general, the Correct article usage
the prediction
percentage
Use synonyms
population
in Malaysia, Indonesia and Thailand increased. Use synonyms
In contrast
, in Linking Words
Philippines
decreased.
Correct article usage
the Philippines
To begin
with, in the first Linking Words
period
, the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
total
Add an article
the total
population
in Malaysia was bigger than Use synonyms
others
. Correct article usage
the others
Then
, in 1990, in Malaysia growth slightly at almost 50%. Linking Words
Subsequently
, the Linking Words
percentage
will be predicted Use synonyms
rise
in 2040 Fix the infinitive
to rise
at
80%. Change preposition
to
Similarly
, in Indonesia, in 1970, the Linking Words
population
at around 12%, Use synonyms
then
in the next year in 1990 jumped Linking Words
at
almost 30%. In Change preposition
to
Indonesia
the Add a comma
Indonesia,
population
will be picked up Use synonyms
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
Use synonyms
period
at Add an article
the period
almost
doubled Add an article
an almost
the almost
percentage
(60%). As same as in Thailand, the total people Use synonyms
in
the beginning of the year at around 20%, Change the preposition
at
then
climbed Linking Words
10
% in 1990. Next Change preposition
to 10
period
, the Use synonyms
population
will be reached Use synonyms
at
approximately 50 Change preposition
apply
percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, the total Linking Words
population
in Use synonyms
Philippines
in 1970 at 30%, Correct article usage
the Philippines
then
in 1990, it Linking Words
risen
slightly Add the auxiliary verb
rose
has risen
at
almost 50%. Change preposition
to
However
, in the next Linking Words
period
in 2010 decreased significantly to 40%. And the Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
period
will reach Use synonyms
at
50% total Remove the preposition
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population
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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