The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.
The bar chat illustrates the ratio of men and women educating in six different field of science in one of the UK universities in the year 2009.
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the number of male participants was much higher in the physics, females were stlightly more interested in the veterinary medicine
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