The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

The given graph provides information about the various

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assesment

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assessment

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India's GDP between 1960 and 2000. Looking at the

overall

structure, it is readily apparent that, the level of agriculture was observed a significant decrease despite being dominant at the beginning of the time, opposite was true services grew up sharply in spite of being the lowest point at the initial period.

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, industry remained more or less the same in a

forty year

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period.

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agriculture was shown

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crucial part of India's economy till 1980,

however

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its points had almost tripled

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twenty years.

In contrast

, the service sector started with a peak level in GDP of about 20% from 1960 to 1980 ,

however

, its input climbed to over 40% in 2000,

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was shown

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most essential part of

economy

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the economy

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.

In addition

, the amount of industry category increased gradually to 10% till 1980,

while

stabled at the same until the end of time.