The graph belowe shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph belowe shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The line graph illustrates
median
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carbon
emissions
per individual in the United
Kingdom
, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. The y-axis indicates
carbon
emissions
in metric
tonnes
while
the x-axis presents the years.
Overall
, individuals in the United
Kingdom
emitted the highest levels of
carbon
dioxide between 1967 and 2007
whereas
Portugal had the least
carbon
emissions
from 1967 up to 1987.
Carbon
dioxide
emissions
in Portugal increased significantly throughout the whole period . Portugal released an average of nearly 2 metric
tonnes
whilst the United
Kingdom
emitted just over 10 metric
tonnes
in 1967. There was a significant rise in
carbon
emissions
in Italy from slightly above 4 metric
tonnes
in 1967 to almost 6.1 metric
tonnes
in 1977;
However
, it remained stable between 1977 to 1989. The average
carbon
dioxide released in the United
Kingdom
fell slightly
overtime
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and in
Sweden
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Sweden,
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there was a rocket in
emissions
from well over 8 metric
tonnes
to about 10.9 metric
tonnes
in 1977 and
this
was
folowed
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followed
by a plummet between 1977 and 1987 from 10.1 metric
tonnes
to almost 6
tonnes
.
In addition
,
emissions
from Italy remained the same at nearly 8 metric
tonnes
between 1977 and 2007.
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