The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville.
The two maps depict the changes in urban planning in the town of Kimsville in the period from 2002 to the present day.
Overall
, Kimsville has undergone significant development and modernization, resulting in the addition of various new facilities.
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To begin
with, in 2002, trees on the north-west were cut down to make room for the construction of a new residential complex. Notably, the shopping centre in the north has remained unchanged. Linking Words
Additionally
, a new train station has been introduced on the western side of the city Linking Words
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the current map, Change preposition
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whereas
the factory on the opposite side has been demolished and replaced by a software company.
Looking at the southern part of town, the old cinema near the city centre has been renovated and converted into a pub. Linking Words
Lastly
, the green space Linking Words
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the south-west has been removed and replaced by a football stadium.Change preposition
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