The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the table provides the
sales
of a small restaurant located in a downtown business district in the week
of October 7th to October 13th from Monday to Sunday and at lunchtime and dinner time.
Overall
, dinner periods had better sales
amount
than lunch periods in the whole week
while
the total sales
amount
of Friday
was the most in the given week
.
According to
the information shown in the table, the total sales
on Friday
were $6850 which was $ 2850 more than that of Sunday by $ 4000 which was the least in the week
. Moreover
, the dinner sales
on Friday
night were $ 4,350 which was the most in the seven nights while
the lunch sales
on Wednesday were the most in the same week
. Furthermore
, it can be apparently seen that the sales
amount
plummeted after Friday
as the sales
amount
on Saturday was $ 2000 less than that on Friday
, Besides
,the trend kept decreasing which contributed to the poor sales
on Sunday.By contrast
,the sales
amount
from Monday to Thursday was relatively stable.Submitted by s99104032 on
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