You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my disappointment with the type of
accommodation
provided by your institution. My name is Sameer Rana, an international student I.D
number XX077, studying the fast-tracked English Change preposition
with I.D
programm
at Correct your spelling
program
the
Seneca College.
From the beginning of the course, I Correct article usage
apply
am
Verb problem
have
finding
it difficult to focus on my Wrong verb form
found
study
because I have been provided a shared Fix the agreement mistake
studies
accommodation
with two another
students. My Correct quantifier usage
other
roomates
stay up all Correct your spelling
roommates
roommate
the
night playing music, Correct article usage
apply
video
games. The Correct word choice
and video
cocophony
makes it quixotic for me to study.
The preeminent reason I Correct your spelling
cacophony
choose
your college Wrong verb form
chose
because
a private Add a missing verb
is because
accommodation
was included in the fees. This
forced me to proceed forward with your college. I expected it to be a small, private room where I can
focus on Wrong verb form
could
study
and Wrong verb form
studying
will
live peacefully.
At Verb problem
apply
last
, I want you to request to
please arrange Correct pronoun usage
you to
Change preposition
for me
me
Correct pronoun usage
apply
an
private Correct article usage
apply
accommodation
as soon as possible. I am attaching my fees
receipt for your reference. As my request is urgent please give Change the noun form
fee
this
matter your immediate attention.
Yours Faithfully,
Sameer Rana.Submitted by sameer.rn9596 on
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task achievement
Consider using more specific examples or elaborations on the accommodation issues for even clearer task achievement.
coherence cohesion
Review the use of complex words to ensure accuracy and avoid any potential confusion. For instance, 'cocophony' might be a typo for 'cacophony'.
coherence cohesion
Keep paragraphs focused, but also aim to link them more smoothly to enhance flow. Using transition words or phrases can help achieve this.
task achievement
You have effectively raised the complaint, outlined your expectations, and requested a resolution, which meets the task requirements.
coherence cohesion
The letter follows a clear structure, with a proper greeting, development of the issue, and a closing that adds to its coherence and cohesion.