The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the
number
of tutors
in the UK which is separated by gender in six educational levels in 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that students had more female teachers
before going to higher educational levels and after 18 years old the number
of male tutors
surpassed females.
On the one hand, in 2010 the number
of preschool teachers
consisted of females with more than 95% which was the highest at that moment while
male tutors
were at its lowest amount with only 5%. Also
, although
the number
of women went down by about 5% in primary school this
portion experienced a 50% reduction in secondary schools. in contrast
, the number
of male teachers
was raised dramaticaly
in secondary schools, by about 40%.
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dramatically
On the other hand
, in the college period, the number
of tutors
was at the same level with 45% for each one and the number
of men increased steadily in private institutes and universities, 5% and 25% respectively. While
the male university professors reached the peak, higher education female teachers
declined and faced the lowest amount, 30% in total.Submitted by ramtin.n1374 on
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