the graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
The line illustrates the
number
of tourists who visited from the coast, the mountains and the lakes in Europe between 1987 and 2007. It is important to note that Use synonyms
number
of the Use synonyms
visitors
to the coast experienced fluctuation in Use synonyms
this
period.
The mountains’ attendance which stood at 20000 in 1987 faced a dramatical growth Linking Words
while
the coast’s Linking Words
number
of tourists which was 40000 in the same year fell to just above 30000 in 1992. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, from 1997 the mountains’ Linking Words
number
remained at 30000 for 5 years Use synonyms
whereas
, the Linking Words
number
of coast Use synonyms
visitors
shot the rocket since 1997 and in 2007 stood at well above 70000. After 2002 the mountains’ attendance slightly rose approximately to 35000.
Meanwhile, the lakes enthusiasts who were 10000 in 1987 faced a significant growth until 1997 with 40000 Use synonyms
visitors
. Use synonyms
hence
, it rose more than past from 1987 to just above 70000 Linking Words
visitors
in 2002. Use synonyms
However
, since that time it dwindled to 50000 in 2007.Linking Words
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