the graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant

the graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
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The line illustrates the
number
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of tourists who visited from the coast, the mountains and the lakes in Europe between 1987 and 2007. It is important to note that
number
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of the
visitors
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to the coast experienced fluctuation in
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period. The mountains’ attendance which stood at 20000 in 1987 faced a dramatical growth
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the coast’s
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of tourists which was 40000 in the same year fell to just above 30000 in 1992.
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, from 1997 the mountains’
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remained at 30000 for 5 years
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, the
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of coast
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shot the rocket since 1997 and in 2007 stood at well above 70000. After 2002 the mountains’ attendance slightly rose approximately to 35000. Meanwhile, the lakes enthusiasts who were 10000 in 1987 faced a significant growth until 1997 with 40000
visitors
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.
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, it rose more than past from 1987 to just above 70000
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in 2002.
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, since that time it dwindled to 50000 in 2007.
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