The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012,2014 and 2016.
The presented illustration provides information about the sum of
beef
which was sent to in
other five countries Change preposition
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such
as Japan, Switzerland, Brazil
, Norway and Uruguay to be sold in 2012, 2014 and 2016.
To commence with, in 2012, meat
of a cow which was transported to Japan was about 224 tonnes, Add an article
the meat
meanwhile
in Add a comma
meanwhile,
Switzerland
it was 23. Add a comma
Switzerland,
Nevertheless
, Brazil
and Uruguay demonstrated a good amount of exports approximately 125,465 and 44,372 loads. In 2014, country
which exported 130,307 Add an article
a country
the country
of
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beef
was Brazil
, the meantime in Switzerland the number of beef
which was sold and
decreased rather than Correct word choice
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last
2 years from 23000 to 17000 kilograms. Correct article usage
the last
Then
in 2016, exported beef
in Norway went down dramatically( from 81 to 17), meantime other 3 nations increased this
exportations
.
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exportation
Overall
, the highest result is shown by Brazil
in
every 2 years. Change preposition
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Hence
, in 2014, when each country had a noticeable change, Uruguay and Switherland did not, even in 2016, Switherland decreased too much more.Submitted by aizered097 on
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