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The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012,2014 and 2016.

The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012,2014 and 2016.
#information #amount #beef #five #countries
The presented illustration provides information about the sum of
beef
 which was sent to
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other five countries
such
 as Japan, Switzerland,
Brazil
, Norway and Uruguay to be sold in 2012, 2014 and 2016. To commence with, in 2012,
meat
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the meat
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 of a cow which was transported to Japan was about 224 tonnes,
meanwhile
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 in
Switzerland
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Switzerland,
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 it was 23.
Nevertheless
,
Brazil
 and Uruguay demonstrated a good amount of exports approximately 125,465 and 44,372 loads. In 2014,
country
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 which exported 130,307
of
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beef
 was
Brazil
, the meantime in Switzerland the number of
beef
 which was sold
and
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decreased rather than
last
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the last
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 2 years from 23000 to 17000 kilograms.
Then
 in 2016, exported
beef
 in Norway went down dramatically( from 81 to 17), meantime other 3 nations increased
this
exportations
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.
Overall
, the highest result is shown by
Brazil
in
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every 2 years.
Hence
, in 2014, when each country had a noticeable change, Uruguay and Switherland did not, even in 2016, Switherland decreased too much more.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words beef, brazil with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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