The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012, 2014 and 2016.

The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012, 2014 and 2016.
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The presented illustration provides information about the sum of meat which was sent to other five countries
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as Japan, Switzerland, Brazil, Norway and Uruguay to be sold in 2012, 2014 and 2016. To commence with, in 2012, the food of a cow which was transported to Japan was about 224 tonnes,meanwhile, in Switzerland, it was 23.
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, Latin America and Uruguay demonstrated a good amount of exports approximately 125,465 and 44,372 loads. In 2014, the country which exported 130,307
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was Brazil, the meantime in Switzerland the number of beef which was sold decreased ) rather than the
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2 years from 23000 to 17000 kilograms.
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in 2016, exported meat in Norway went down dramatically( from 81 to 17), meantime other 3 nations increased
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exportation.
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, the highest result is shown by Brazil every 2 years.
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, in 2014, when each country had a noticeable change, Uruguay and Switherland did not, and even in 2016, Switherland decreased too much more.
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