The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration depicts the process of producing instant noodles.
This
is an eight step
procedure Add a hyphen
eight-step
begins
with storing the raw ingredients and ends with packaging the goods.
The process starts Correct pronoun usage
that begins
from
stored goods being mixed with water and oil and Change preposition
with
turn
into paste, and Wrong verb form
turned
flatten
with a device's rolling Wrong verb form
flattened
mechansim
, turning it into pasted sheets . the sheets are shredded through a machine and Correct your spelling
mechanism
lengthned
for them Correct your spelling
lengthened
into
be shaped into noodles. Change preposition
to
Then
, they will be rounded into discs of noodle
in the next step for them Fix the agreement mistake
noodles
be
easily fitted. After that, they will be dumped into oil in order for them to be cooked, and later let to be dried out. From Fix the infinitive
to be
this
point, the packaging starts, the cooked noodles will be put into a cup shaped
package containing vegetables and spices. The final part is to add the brand and seal the product in order to be distributed to the consumers.Add a hyphen
cup-shaped
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