The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by a hand.

The diagram explains how a violin is manufactured by hand.

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1 paragraphs

10 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

luthier
artisanal
acoustical properties
seasoning (of wood)
carving
meticulous
sculpting
varnish
durability
signature (in the context of uniqueness)
assembly
optimization
craftsmanship

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The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by a hand.

Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products. What are those methods? Which is the most effective method?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their and attention to studying for qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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