The graph below shows information about the total oil consumption of four major consumers from 2009 to 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the total oil consumption of four major consumers from 2009 to 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart provides information about how much
oil
consumption of four consumers, namely
USA
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,
China
, Western
Europe
&
Japan
, and the
Middle
East between 2009 and 2030.
Overall
, there is a rise in the
figures
for
oil
expenditures in
China
and the
Middle
East throughout the period, with the decrease in the
figures
for the
USA
and Western
Europe
&
Japan
.
In addition
, the
USA
consistently has the fluctuation and highest
figures
but
the
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dramatic decline in the
last
two years. At the beginning of the period, in 2009, the number of the
USA
citizens consuming
oil
started at 9
millions
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million
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of
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barrels
per
day
, after which it saw growth to 10
millions
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million
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of
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barrels
per
day
. The
figures
for
China
and the
Middle
East saw a similar change, both increasing to a peak of just over 2
millions
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of
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barrels
per
day
. Opposite changes can be seen in the
figures
for Western
Europe
&
Japan
people
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oil
consumption
decline
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to 3
millions
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million
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of
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barrels
per
day
. By 2025, the total utilization of
oil
in the
USA
is predicted to dramatically drop, reaching 8
millions
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million
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of
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barrels
per
day
.
Middle
East people are expected to increase at the same rate, just over 3
millions
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million
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of
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barrels
per
day
in the next five years. The
figures
for
China
and Western
Europe
&
Japan
will decrease to end at just under 4 and 2
millions
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barrels
of
oil
per
day
in 2030 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, usa, china, europe, japan, middle, figures, millions, barrels, day with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.

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