The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph above delineates the total percentage of
men
and women
in Australia who did physical activities
in the year 2010, based on their age
group
.
The overall
chart depicts a consistent pattern of both genders who have involved
in physical Add a missing verb
been involved
activities
.
However
, throughout the graph
we can see a female domination over Add a comma
graph,
male
which means that Fix the agreement mistake
males
women
have more intrest
in extracurricular Correct your spelling
interest
activities
than men
. According to
male sex data, 15
to 24 Correct article usage
the 15
age
group
men
had more physical strength than rest
of the Correct article usage
the rest
age
group
. On the other hand
, 45 to 54 age
group
women
had more interest in strength gain with a range of 53.3 per cent and this
is the highest of all age
groups who had engaged in physical activities
.
In contrast
, we can observe an equal involvement of both men
and women
on
or above the Change preposition
at
age
of 65 which means, both genders took physical health as a serious concern at the age
of 65. To sum up
, as age
increases women
starts
looking into physical health more than Change the verb form
start
men
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, activities, age, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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