The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph above delineates the total percentage of
men
and Use synonyms
women
in Australia who did physical Use synonyms
activities
in the year 2010, based on their Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
.
The Use synonyms
overall
chart depicts a consistent pattern of both genders who have Linking Words
involved
in physical Add a missing verb
been involved
activities
.
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However
, throughout the Linking Words
graph
we can see a female domination over Add a comma
graph,
male
which means that Fix the agreement mistake
males
women
have more Use synonyms
intrest
in extracurricular Correct your spelling
interest
activities
than Use synonyms
men
. Use synonyms
According to
male sex data, Linking Words
15
to 24 Correct article usage
the 15
age
Use synonyms
group
Use synonyms
men
had more physical strength than Use synonyms
rest
of the Correct article usage
the rest
age
Use synonyms
group
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, 45 to 54 Linking Words
age
Use synonyms
group
Use synonyms
women
had more interest in strength gain with a range of 53.3 per cent and Use synonyms
this
is the highest of all Linking Words
age
groups who had engaged in physical Use synonyms
activities
.
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In contrast
, we can observe an equal involvement of both Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
Use synonyms
on
or above the Change preposition
at
age
of 65 which means, both genders took physical health as a serious concern at the Use synonyms
age
of 65. Use synonyms
To sum up
, as Linking Words
age
increases Use synonyms
women
Use synonyms
starts
looking into physical health more than Change the verb form
start
men
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, activities, age, group with synonyms.
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