The line graph below shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city, by gender

The line graph below shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city, by gender
The line graph illustrates the
number
of subscribers of mobile phones by both male and female residents in Marycille
city
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from 1995 to 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
women primarily subscribe in the first ten years.
However
, they are surpassed by men in the second half of the period.
To begin
with, women started the period at roughly 600 and surged to 1500 in 2000,
consequently
, it soared by 1000 which reached a peak at 2500 in 2005. After that, the
number
slightly dropped to approximately 2300 in 2010 and
then
hovered at the same
number
until the end of the period.
Additionally
, the total of male subscribers began at exactly 500 before it dramatically increased to nearly 1300 in the year 2000. A noticeable jump to the same
number
of female subscribers, at 2500, was seen in 2005. Afterwards, it levelled off at
this
number
until in 2030, it gradually shot up to the highest point at 2700.
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