Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others see that having a friendly relations is better. what do you think? Discus both points and give us opinion.
Certain folks believe that if
students
are scared of the teacher
it is better. Others also
support a close relations
with the Correct the article-noun agreement
close relations
a close relation
teacher
is better.
First
Correct article usage
The first
perspectives
is some citizens prefer Fix the agreement mistake
perspective
students
afraid of their teachers
because of the development of respectful
. Respect is an important Replace the word
respect
things
that Change the noun form
thing
students
must to
learn about, particularly to the Change the verb form
apply
teachers
since teachers
give them a knowledge
and full dedication to bring Remove the article
knowledge
a piece of knowledge
human
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humans
into
their capability. In many Change preposition
to
develop
Asian countries Change the form of the verb
developed
such
as Japan and Singapore, they implement the
character building in each school. Definitely, the purpose of Correct article usage
apply
this
concept is to enhance their attitude during the
school time.
Meanwhile, there is a Correct article usage
apply
contrast
opinion, Replace the word
contrasting
which
Change preposition
in which
students
incline
to have an intimate Wrong verb form
are inclined
relation
with Replace the word
relationship
teachers
to increase their communication. Communication is one of the essential things which humans need to connect with each other. For instance
, there are some mental health cases that happen to young generations during their learning progress
. Correct your spelling
process
Thus
, to solve that problem, students
need a teacher
's role to discuss with. If the students
comfort
Wrong verb form
comforted
with
their Change preposition
by
teachers
, then
they feel a teacher
not
only Add a missing verb
is not
a parents
but Correct the article-noun agreement
parents
a parent
also
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a friends
friends
Fix the agreement mistake
friend
for
Change preposition
apply
them
.
In conclusion, the Correct pronoun usage
apply
teacher
's role both a
Change preposition
as a
teacher
that
can be afraid of and a Correct pronoun usage
who
teacher
who can be colleagues have
advantages and disadvantages which can leadCorrect subject-verb agreement
has
a
positive and negative impact since Change preposition
to a
that
Correct determiner usage
apply
teachers
must consider their position with diversity
of Correct article usage
the diversity
students
character to make a Change noun form
students'
student's
well
bonding with them.Change the adverb
good
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