The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps present the

village

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of Bunborough today and developmental plans for the

village

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in 2024.

Overall

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, there will be more transport options and the residential

area

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will remain unchanged n 2024.

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, the shopping

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will remain the same,

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the residential

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will be expanded. A railway line will be constructed from the north east of houses to Lynwich and a railway station will be built on the centre of the

village

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near the residential

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, 2 hotels are going to be installed in the

village

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, one on the left side of the shopping centre and the other

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the beach. The fishing port will be demolish and replaced with a promenade. Two houses will be added across the road which connects the shops and main street that goes to. Maychester.

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, a short cut road will be installed from Lynwich to the planned

rail way

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railway

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station and

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will provide tourists visiting the beach and staying on the nearby hotel to have more transport options

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

171 words

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