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The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in 5 European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in 5 European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table presents data about the
figures
 of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
 and bananas in a period of 6 years from 1999 to 2004 in five nations of
European
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Europe
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.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
UK
 and
Switzerland
 took the highest
figures
,
while
 the
UK
 took the lead in
coffee
sales
,
Switzerland
 occupied the highest
figures
 in bananas. Speaking of
coffee
 in
a
Correct article usage
the
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 period from 1999 to 2004, the
coffee
figures
of
Change preposition
in
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 the
UK
 went up the most from 1.5 to 20 (
millions
 of
euros
). The second place belonged to
Switzerland
 with
increase
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an increase
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 remarkably from 3 to 6 (
millions
 of
euros
). The
figures
of
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for
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 Denmark, Belgium and Sweden rose slowly from 11.8 to 2, from 1 to 1.7 and from 0.8 to 1 (
millions
 of
euros
) respectively. As regards bananas in 1999 and 2004, the
sales
 of
Switzerland
 accounted for
the
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apply
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first place with
increase
Correct article usage
an increase
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 dramatically from 15 to 47 (
millions
 of
euros
) followed by the
sales
 of the
UK
 with
increase
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an increase
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 noticeably from 1 to 5.5 (
millions
 of
euros
). The
sales
of
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in
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 Belgium grew slightly from 0.6 to 4 (
millions
 of
euros
).
By contrast
, the
sales
 of Sweden and Denmark decreased steadily from 1.8 to 1 and from 2 to 0.9 (
millions
 of
euros
) respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words figures, coffee, uk, switzerland, sales, millions, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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