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The pie chart show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries;China and India

The pie chart show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries;China and India
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The charts illustrate the proposition of four kinds of
food
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 which were consumed in the
world
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 in comparison with two different countries in the year 2008.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 in the
world
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as well as
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 in
China
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 and
India
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, processed
food
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 accounted for the largest proportion.
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, nuts and seeds were the least popular
food
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 choices in
India
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 and globally
while
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 Chinese people preferred animal
food
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 the least. The proportion of processed
food
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 consumption stood at 41% globally,
while
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this
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 figure for
India
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 (39%) was 5% higher than that in
China
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. In terms of vegetables and fruit, the figures for
China
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 and the whole
world
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 were nearly the same, at around 30%, compared to just 23% in
India
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. Regarding the remaining categories, average consumption of animal
food
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 in
India
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 and globally saw two similar figures, at 27% and 26% respectively, which were almost twice as much as that in
China
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.
By contrast
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, nuts and seeds were consumed the least in
India
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 (11%) and the
world
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 (4%)
while
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 the figure for
this
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 category in
China
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 was quite significant (19%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, world, china, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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