The pie chart show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries;China and India

The pie chart show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries;China and India
The charts illustrate the proposition of four kinds of
food
which were consumed in the
world
in comparison with two different countries in the year 2008.
Overall
,
it is clear that
in the
world
as well as
in
China
and
India
, processed
food
accounted for the largest proportion.
In contrast
, nuts and seeds were the least popular
food
choices in
India
and globally
while
Chinese people preferred animal
food
the least. The proportion of processed
food
consumption stood at 41% globally,
while
this
figure for
India
(39%) was 5% higher than that in
China
. In terms of vegetables and fruit, the figures for
China
and the whole
world
were nearly the same, at around 30%, compared to just 23% in
India
. Regarding the remaining categories, average consumption of animal
food
in
India
and globally saw two similar figures, at 27% and 26% respectively, which were almost twice as much as that in
China
.
By contrast
, nuts and seeds were consumed the least in
India
(11%) and the
world
(4%)
while
the figure for
this
category in
China
was quite significant (19%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, world, china, india with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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