The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fueld in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph shows energy consumption by main fuels in the UK

around

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from around

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1981 until 2000

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apply

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fluctuating

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Petroleum fuels have been the dominant type and will continue

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trend into the future. Natural gas sources have represented a small but significant proportion of total energy use, slowly British citizens will use

this

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energy,and abandon the use of coal. Petroleum commanded the biggest share with 140 units in 1986, but

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fuel degradation in 1991, and

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trend is set to continue

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around 1996 to 2000. In 1981 coal dan natural gas came in second and

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with around 80

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units

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and 40

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, respectively.

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, natural gas overtook coal in 1992 and, despite some fluctuation, is set to be the second most used fuel in 2000 with just over 100

unit

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units

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. It is predicted that coal will level off and remain relatively constant at about

30 something

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30-something

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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150 words

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It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that entertainment such as film star pop musicians or sports star are paid to much money Do you agree or disagree? Which other type of jobs should be highly paid.?