the chart below shows the value changes in UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000

the chart below shows the value changes in UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000
The chart compares the three
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of
steel
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industry of the United Kingdom from 1970 to 2000.
While
the total UK demand and production decreased gradually the import increased steadily. As the graph shows, the total demand figure started at 200
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in 1970. Next decade, it declined slowly to over 150
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per
year
.
Then
, it dropped sharply to about 110
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in 1990 and continued its downward trend to hit the lowest point at 100
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in 2000. Regarding UK production, approximately 160
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of steel was produced in 1970. Afterwards, it fell quickly to under 100
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in 1990. After that, the indicator stayed stable at nearly 90
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by 2000. Turning to import, about 10
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of steel was imported in 1970. By 1980, the figure for
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went up considerably to under 50
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. Afterwards, it had a slow rise to 50
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in 1990.
Then
, it grew slightly to reach a peak at about 80
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year
in 2000.
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