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the chart below shows the value changes in UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000

the chart below shows the value changes in UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000
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steel
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the steel
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 industry of the United Kingdom from 1970 to 2000.
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 the total UK demand and production decreased gradually the import increased steadily. As the graph shows, the total demand figure started at 200
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kilogram
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 in 1970. Next decade, it declined slowly to over 150
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kilogram
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.
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, it dropped sharply to about 110
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kilogram
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 in 1990 and continued its downward trend to hit the lowest point at 100
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 in 2000. Regarding UK production, approximately 160
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kilogram
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 of steel was produced in 1970. Afterwards, it fell quickly to under 100
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 in 1990. After that, the indicator stayed stable at nearly 90
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 by 2000. Turning to import, about 10
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kilogram
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 of steel was imported in 1970. By 1980, the figure for
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imports
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 went up considerably to under 50
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kilograms
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. Afterwards, it had a slow rise to 50
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 in 1990.
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, it grew slightly to reach a peak at about 80
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 in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words kilogram, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
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