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the pie chart below show units of electrocity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000

the pie chart below show units of electrocity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000
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The pie chart below illustrates
amount
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the amount
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 of manufacturing electricity by using 5 different sources in
Australia
 and
France
 over two decades from 1980 until 2000.
Overall
 ,it can be seen that in 1980
coal’s
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coal
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 used to be widespread in
both
 countries .Afterwards , In
Australia
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Australia,
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 the figure increased sharply ,
while
 in
France
 it has been dropped.
According to
 the data , in 1980 coal and natural gas ‘ consuming
percent
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per cent
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 were equal to 50 and 20
percents
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percent
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,
while
 in
Australia
both
 coal and natural gas’
applying
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 was 25
percent
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per cent
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.Regarding
to
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the lowest point ,in
France
 it is 5
belong
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 to
Hydro
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Hydropower
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power
 ,
while
 in
Australia
 where number doubted is oil.
in
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both
 sides
number
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a number
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 of gas and nuclear
power
 were similar,
that is
 15
percents
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percent
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. Two decades later ,in
Australia
 the highest
percent
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 from sources belonging to coal ,
while
 in
France
 the figure
turning
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 to nuclear
power
.In
both
 industries gas and
hydro
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hydropower
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power
 were the tiniest
that is
 2
percent
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per cent
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.Hydri
power
percent
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per cent
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 in
Australia
 was 36 ,
while
 in
Framce
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France
 the figure lost 10
percents
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percent
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 and
matching
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 with coal and oil employing
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, france, both, percent, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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