The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comaprisions where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the
spenditure
of Correct your spelling
expenditure
police
sector three of which are the salaries, the technology, and the building and transport expenses in Correct article usage
the police
one
of the areas of the UK as well as
the table provides some data about how this
budget had been
gathered from three different sources including the National Government, local taxes, and other sources Wrong verb form
was
such
as grants in the years
2017 and 2018.
Overall
, the main money provider in the table was the National Government in two years
. In addition
, the workers' salary was the highest cost of this
firm in both years
2017 and 2018.
With regard to table
, the total Add an article
the table
saving
of Fix the agreement mistake
savings
police
Correct article usage
the police
office
was about 304.7 Replace the word
officers
million
pound
which gradually increased and reached 318.6 Change to a plural noun
pounds
million
pound
after Change to a plural noun
pounds
one
year. Majority
Correct article usage
The majority
of
Change preposition
apply
the
of Correct article usage
apply
This
money invested
by the National Government , with 175.5 Add a missing verb
was invested
million
pound
in 2017 and 177.8 Change to a plural noun
pounds
million
pound
in the year 2018.
The costs, by the way of comparison, Change to a plural noun
pounds
dedicated
to three segments Add a missing verb
are dedicated
one
of which had the most
percentage among Correct word choice
highest
others
. Having 75% and 69% of the payments Correct article usage
the others
constentively
in the Correct your spelling
consecutively
constructively
constitutively
years
2017 and 2018, officers and staff earnings was
the crucial Correct subject-verb agreement
were
one
to mention.Correct pronoun usage
ones
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