Task 1 Academic Graph charts show various activities in a US office in 1980 , 2000

Task 1 Academic

Graph charts show various activities in a US office in 1980 , 2000
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The pie chart depicted below illustrates various
activities
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in an office located in the USA in 1980 and 2000. In 1980, using the phone was in first place with more than a quarter of all usages
while
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this
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position belonged to computer, by the same percentage, in 2000. Meetings had a visible change during
this
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period, and it decreased to approximately half. Looking at the bar chart, it is evident that using computers became more popular in 2000,
while
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paper documents had a drop. Computer usage had significantly changed during
this
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period,
while
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it had changed about 28% from 1980 to 2000. On the flip side, paper documents were more popular in 1980 with around 20%, and it had a fall of about 10%, and it was around a half in 2000.
According to
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the bar chart, phone usage was about 30% of all
activities
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, in 1980, and it decreased to 14%, in 2000.
In addition
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, paper works had one-fifth of all, in 1980, and it dropped to half, in 2000. To turn to other
activities
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such
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as email, it is shown that in 1980 there was not any email,
however
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, in 2000, email had roughly 8% of
this
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office
activities
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. Face-to-face communication, with 14%, remained steady during
this
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time.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words activities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • traditional activities
  • digital activities
  • emergence
  • significant changes
  • technological progress
  • business practices
  • evolving communication methods
  • surprising findings
  • shaped
  • speculate
  • observed data
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