The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

The presented pie graphs

ilustrate

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illustrate

the distribution of median homestead

consuming

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consumption

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in two observed years in the state.

Overall

, the various utilization of domestic

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into six things

such

as housing, food, health care, education, transportation, and other expenses. The patterns

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gradually changed

among

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between

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the year of 1950s and 2010s.

Initially

, the

accomodation

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accommodation

dominated the percentages at 72,1 % in 1950,

then

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nutriment came in

th

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the

second field at 11,2 %, and the other four filled the space.

Conversly

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Conversely

, the trends

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changed

the

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throughout the

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whole period.

Moreover

, the nourishment increased the ratio at 34 % in 2010.

Secondly

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the lodging decreased

at

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22 %, in the reversal the mobilization

rised

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rose

respectively

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14 %.

Similarly

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the

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school and health protection

had the gaining

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in number. In conclusion, the charts showed the development of domestic expenses which made

the

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society more concerned about the eats than

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shelter in 2010,

eventhough

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even though

the

needs

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of

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other goods had

growing

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in proportion.