The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares how much income
that
US Correct word choice
apply
households
earned yearly in 2007, 211 and 2015.
It is clear that
the population of people earned
annual income in the $100,000 or more Correct pronoun usage
who earned
bracket
roughly were
the most in the three years, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
while
there are
the least people Wrong verb form
were
made
money in the $75,000-99,999 Correct pronoun usage
who made
bracket
.
It is noticeable that,
Remove the comma
apply
around
nearly 30 Change preposition
apply
million
of
US Change preposition
apply
households
earned income above $100,000 in 2007 and in 2011, and it also
the only range that US Add a missing verb
is also
households
over 30 million
in 2015. By contrast
, the number of households
stood the
lowest point in the $75,000-99,999 money Change preposition
at the
bracket
, at 14 million
in 2007, approximately 13 million
in 2011 and 15 million
in 2015.
Looking at the chart in more detail, there is similar
number of Add an article
a similar
households
in the less than $25,000 bracket
and among $
25,000-$49,000 Correct article usage
the $
bracket
, and the figure both ranged from 25 million
to 30 million
. Moreover
, the figure for $
25,000-$49,000 is Correct article usage
the $
little
higher than the figure for Correct article usage
a little
less
than $25,000 Correct article usage
the less
bracket
in three different years.Submitted by h14030013 on
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