some people believe a high salary is the most important factor when choosing a job. others believe that a good working environment is more important. discuss both view and give your opinion

Pepole

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People

have different views when it comes to working;

While

some people believe that

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more income is the main reason

to

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choosing a

job

, others, with different ideas,

belive

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believe

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that the most important factor is a good vibe in

workplace

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.

despit

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Despite

the fact that income is important, I would argue that a good environment is a top priority in a

job

. On the one hand, earning more

money

is always one of the individual's top

aim

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, in their life,

therefore

some of them have faith

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money

, and they want to earn it

by

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any cost.

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, they say when you have

money

, other elements are not important, and you can solve all of your problems with

money

. When

these kind

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of people apply for a

job

, they only consider the wage, nothing else, so they may work in

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bad

condition

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,

while

they accept

this

situation.

On the other hand

, others believe in another way. They believe when you want to choose a profession, always working environment is at the top priority, so they did not decide only based on

money

. In My opinion, working

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any cost will be harmful

for

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your mental and physical health,

therefore

you must consider the workplace atmosphere. I believe that when you attend

in

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a

job

, and it suits you

any way

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, mentally

phisicaly

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physically

and

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etc, only with

job

satisfaction you can earn more

money

. In these circumstances,

environment

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pushes you forward,

while

it

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out your energy,

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versa.

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the end, despite the fact that some people have more

believe

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on

money

, I would say,

Money

is not so important, and well mental health is more important.

Forthemore

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Furthermore

, one of the main

reason

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for choosing a profession is income, but

job

fullfilment

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fulfilment

is on top of that.