The charts below give information about world spending and population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about world spending and population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs provide data about global spending and the number of people.
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, it can be observed which continent is leading in terms of population and what matter
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spent the most amount of money on.
According to
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the information, Asia is the most populated continent with a whopping 57
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percent
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, dominating the rest. Europe and America equally come
next,
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with both of them holding 14
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percent
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of
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the
population. Africa with a tenth of a
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standing
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third place, and the rest of the continents with only 5
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. As
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what categories the
spendings
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go to, Food is the main one,
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covering almost a 1/4
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percent
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. Transportation with just below 1/5 of the
spends
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. Housing
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12
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percent
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of the whole 100 and clothing with a mere
precentage
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percentage
of 6.
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all of the combined only cover just above 50
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of the
spendings
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spending
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. Other forms of spending methods cover the rest with 40
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percent
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.
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