The chart gives information about questionaire results for drinking habits, purchasing fresh tea, and people's coffee in five different Australian cities (Sydney,Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart). Overall, it is clear from the chart the highest rate of city residents went to a cafe for drinking coffee or tea, while, the lowest rate of them purchased fresh coffee.

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of drinking habits, buying natural tea and Pipils coffee in various

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(Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart).

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