Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease , government sholud focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals think that the contamination of the environment and

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pollution

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from housing will be decreased by the

government

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intervention are able to avoid

health

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problems and

pandemic

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. From

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view of the writer, the

government

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are

correctly

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when they proceed

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this

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action because

its

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leads to both the fall

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the rate people can be ill and residents will have a healthy and unpolluted life. It should

be acknowledge

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that climate change is the best issue

which

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that

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every

nations

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nation

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have

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to combat can save about

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lives.

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is true because,

pollution

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is hard to escape, especially

air

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pollution

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,

now

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matter how rich an area you live in. It is all around us, microscopic pollutants in the

air

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can slip past our body's defences, damaging

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lung

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lungs

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, heart and brain.

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, sunlight, wind and wave action break down the

plactic

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plastic

fragments into small particles, often less than half a

centimet

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centimetre

across. Plastic microfibers have been found in municipal drinking water systems and drifting through the

air

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. The housing crisis with urban sprawl

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to the loss of natural habitats, increased greenhouse gas emissions, and reduced

air

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and water quality.

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, simply focusing on environmental and housing complications is not an effective way to combat all illnesses. It is imperative to recognize alongside these efforts, the

government

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should prioritize raising public awareness and implementing educational programs.

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, the promotion of robust lifestyles can encourage people to adopt healthy habits. To illustrate, a campaign in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam called upon the local citizens to incorporate a daily 30 minute-morning walk into their routines.

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, the participants reported noticeable improvements in their mental and physical

health

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.

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, by enriching the population’s knowledge about

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and prompting them to a more active lifestyle, the

government

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not only lowers disease-related mortality rates but

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eases the burden on its healthcare system.

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, it is pivotal for governments to come up with initiatives to tackle obstacles posed by

pollution

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and housing inefficiency in order to improve the population’s

health

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.

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, the underlying problems are not limited to those conundrums and the population itself

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plays a crucial role.