The bar chart shows teh hoghest qualification attained by sex fro the working age population in wales in 2001/2002. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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bar graph illustrates the highest

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sex for

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working age individuals in Wales in 2001/2002.

Overall

, the highest number of individuals had

aquired

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acquired

GCE A level or GCSE grade A*-C or

equivalant

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equivalent

as their

qualification

in 2001/2002 ,with a greater

margin

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sex;

whereas

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lowest number of

males

and

females

had attained higher education qualifications with a narrow

margin

inbetween

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between

in between

males

and female. In

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,

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approximately

28% of

males

were able to have GCE A level or equivalent as their

qualification

whereas

females

had secured the same with a

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13%

margin

less than the

males

.

However

, around 29% of

females

were able to have GCSE grade A*-C with a near 10 %

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higher

margin

compared to the

males

.

Moreover

, as many

females

as

males

,

aproximaely

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approximately

9%, had obtained higher education qualifications

while

around 25% of

females

and 20% of

males

not

aquired

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acquired

any qualifications. Yet as many

males

as

females

were able to

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an other

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qualification

.