The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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The chart provides data on consumer expenditure on different goods in five countries in 2002

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Ireland

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and

Turkey

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significantly consumed Food/Drinks/Tobacco,

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,the other nations had approximately the same percentage in other categories( Clothing/Footwear and Leisure/Education).

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with, the most popular category was Food/Drinks/Tobacco,where

Ireland

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and

Turkey

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had the highest percentages 28,91% and 32,14%,respectively. The other three countries Sweden,Spain and Italy had approximately the same quantity 15,77%,18,80% and 16,36%.

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, in Clothing/Footwear Italy had the first place with 9,00%,and other nations Sweden,

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,Spain,and

Turkey

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had a creeping pace of 5,40%,6,43%,6,51%,and 6,63%,respectively.

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, in terms of Leisure/Education was the lowest category of

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table,where

Turkey

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had the highest percentage 4,35%. Sweden and Italy had the same quantity with 3,22% and 3,20% and

Ireland

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and Spain had 2,21% and 1,98% respectively.

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

More and more women are now going out to work and some women are now the major salary earner in the family. What are the causes of this, and what effect is this having on families and society?

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