The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The chart provides data on consumer expenditure on different goods in five countries in 2002
Overall
, Ireland
and Turkey
significantly consumed Food/Drinks/Tobacco,however
,the other nations had approximately the same percentage in other categories( Clothing/Footwear and Leisure/Education).
To begin
with, the most popular category was Food/Drinks/Tobacco,where Ireland
and Turkey
had the highest percentages 28,91% and 32,14%,respectively. The other three countries Sweden,Spain and Italy had approximately the same quantity 15,77%,18,80% and 16,36%.
However
, in Clothing/Footwear Italy had the first place with 9,00%,and other nations Sweden,Ireland
,Spain,and Turkey
had a creeping pace of 5,40%,6,43%,6,51%,and 6,63%,respectively.
Furthermore
, in terms of Leisure/Education was the lowest category of this
table,where Turkey
had the highest percentage 4,35%. Sweden and Italy had the same quantity with 3,22% and 3,20% and Ireland
and Spain had 2,21% and 1,98% respectively.Submitted by batirka06 on
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