Writing Task 1 (From Cambridge IELTS Book 10, test 1) You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

Writing Task 1 (From Cambridge IELTS Book 10, test 1)

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second

chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The pie charts compare shares of various items on
energy
usage in households on average in Australia,
as well as
their subsequent greenhouse gas
emissions
.
Overall
, It is evident that Heating and
water
heating purposes account for the highest amount of
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both
energy
utilization and gas
emissions
among all,
while
Lighting and cooling make up the lower shares. Regarding
energy
usage, with 42% and 30%, heating and
water
heating hold the top positions with a considerable difference with the third rank which is Refrigeration( 7%). followed by Lighting with 4% and cooling half of that. The remaining 15% is attributed to other appliances. In terms of Greenhouse gas
emissions
,
Water
heating represents 32%
ofi
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of
off
the total
emissions
.
this
is followed by heating and refrigeration with approximately
same
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figures which are about half of that for
the
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water
heating. Lighting(8%) and cooling ( 3%) are at the bottom. Other appliances consume the
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28% share of
energy
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, emissions, water with synonyms.
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