(From Cambridge IELTS Book 10, test 1) The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare shares of various items on

energy

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usage in households on average in Australia,

as well as

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their subsequent greenhouse gas

emissions

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, It is evident that Heating and

water

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heating purposes account for the highest amount of

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both

energy

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utilization and gas

emissions

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among all,

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Lighting and cooling make up the lower shares. Regarding

energy

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usage, with 42% and 30%, heating and

water

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heating hold the top positions with a considerable difference with the third rank which is Refrigeration( 7%). followed by Lighting with 4% and cooling half of that. The remaining 15% is attributed to other appliances. In terms of Greenhouse gas

emissions

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,

Water

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heating represents 32%

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of

off

the total

emissions

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.

this

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is followed by heating and refrigeration with approximately

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figures which are about half of that for

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water

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heating. Lighting(8%) and cooling ( 3%) are at the bottom. Other appliances consume the

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28% share of

energy

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