Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Say how important new year is to people in your country -Describe how new year is celebrated in your country -Explain what you like about new year celebrations in your country.
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Dear Abhay,
It’s great to hear from you and your project is very interesting. I’d like to tell you about Nav-varsh, which is the
hindu
new year, celebrated in India.
Nav-varsh marks the beginning of Change the capitalization
Hindu
new
year here. It is the most Add an article
the new
sought after
event, held the Add a hyphen
sought-after
day
after Diwali. We have a public holiday on this
day
as it is the biggest festival in my country.
The fest starts with wearing new clothes and visiting a temple. The loved ones unite on this
day
and convey good wishes to one another. We visit our relatives and share gift
with them as well. Our homes are decorated with Fix the agreement mistake
gifts
flower
and the Fix the agreement mistake
flowers
member
of the family Fix the agreement mistake
members
get-together
to cook various traditional dishes. Loved ones enjoy a family dinner in the evening and the Correct your spelling
get together
day
ends with lighting the fire crackers
.
The best part that I cherish about nav-varsh is that the near and dear ones unite and wish each other good health and well-being. One gets love, blessings and gifts from elders and the atmosphere is filled with joy.
I hope that helps. Do ask if there’s anything else you’d like to know.
Yours lovingly,
Nirav.Correct your spelling
firecrackers
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task achievement
Consider providing more diverse examples or a wider range of details for each part of the celebration to enhance task achievement.
coherence cohesion
Use a wider range of cohesive devices and paragraphing to link ideas across the letter more effectively.
task achievement
The letter effectively addresses the prompts around the importance, celebration, and personal enjoyment of New Year in your country.
coherence cohesion
Good use of paragraphs and clear progression of ideas throughout the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite