The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The
line
graph evidences numeral statistics regarding the
amount
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of
exportations
of Australia to four different countries.
Overall
, we can see that the graph takes into consideration the period that starts from 1990 and ends
up
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in 2012.
Furthermore
, every country is not named, but they are represented by different coloured lines. It is evident that, for many years, the nation indicated with the blue
line
has been the place which received more importations from Australia.
However
, from 2007, the red
line
took the first place, covering around 28% of Australian
exportations
in 2012. More detailed, the blue
line
indicates a nation that experienced a constant decrease from 1990 to 2012, where it received about 16% of Australian
exportations
.
In addition
, the country represented by the orange
line
saw periods of up and down, which brought it to an
overall
decrease in percentage over the period analysed.
Moreover
, from 2000 to 2012, the brown
line
behaved in the opposite manner of the orange
line
. Before that year, it faced a steady amount of
exportations
received from Australia.
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